Bleed
In delicate lines
She Counts the Lashes
That swell
Upon her back
&
Branch
Across her spine
Like some faraway map
She Counts the Lashes
That swell
Upon her back
&
Branch
Across her spine
Like some faraway map
In present time
They come to rest
With scars she'll carry
Hidden
Beneath a sack
Too cumbersome
For everyday tasks
(Just one of many)
With scars she'll carry
Hidden
Beneath a sack
Too cumbersome
For everyday tasks
(Just one of many)
13 comments:
What a deep and emotional poem here. This certainly evokes crucifixion for me as well. I am quite touched and moved by this piece. Beautifully written.
Thanks Katina!
Such a pretty header; the back of this sunflower is as attractive as the front, or is this the front and the other side the ...now I am confused!
Seriously it is very attractive and makes you LOOK!
The poem so sad and so very deep like a big hole one is never able to crawl out of it.
Oh thanks Titania! No your right..its the back. I guess this was a bit dark wasn't it! This kind of thing gets me down. Well I'm so glad you came by for the read- hope you have a wonderful day!
Very beautiful.
Hi Regina,
A beautiful poem! Saw your comment on Margaret of Molokai today. I was wondering if you have written anything about Molokai?
Nicolette, www.leprahealthinaction.org
Amazing frame of words!
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very beautiful photos you have here.. this is why I´m offering you an award... to receive it please enter my blog!
Hi there Amin.. Nicolette (greetings-glad you stopped by..no, I haven't, I only read the book- I will come by),
Bhavesh Chhatbar- thank you!!
Paula- I'm very grateful-just left comment!!
Thanks to all for your visit!
you are a photographic wizzard; your headers are brilliant.
your poem is so very dark by comparison. Beautiful
Friko- thank you- your words are truly encouraging!
So deep , full of pain.
Its a moving poem dear friend.
(PS. Its an ube (purple yam) ice cream.
The halo-halo is available all year round.
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Hey..thank you Regina- and for the info!! The colors are so appitizing huh?! Have a great day-
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