Sunday, October 4, 2009

The Dance, In Acrostic

My Monochrome Weekly submission is below the dog & kitten..(Passion on the Vine)-

I have to say, the inspiration for doing Acrostic, really comes from a very special lady over at Write in Motion- a terrific writer and poet-




Reciprocation

Rain falls unmerited, like grace
Every pore soaked, replenishes
Couldn't call conditional, initially, the love He
Initiated, interaction became the
Partition- was His provision, rhythmic like a pulse as
Rapturous vapors rise to greet the sun
Oh, but we've been mentored by the dawn, yet
Choices, it's clear.. capsize and closure is
All we might settle for, still
Thanks, tis but our way we reciprocate..but to
Imagine falsely- unity or
Oneness now, harmony's sweet melodious beats- simply recurring?
No never, cause there is a stipulation..gratitude means validation-



10 comments:

Regina said...

Wonderful acrostic. Can I make one too:).
Lovely mono. They look so cute curling.

Have a great week my friend.

Kilauea Poetry said...

I bet you'd do a terrific job- thanks for the read Regina-

Robin said...

What a beautiful hibiscus. You don't see variegated ones like that here in Israel.

PS I too love all those wonderful round rocks too but we don't have them either - that shot is from the coast of Maine, taken during my recent vacation.

Puna said...

wow, you livein hawaii? Lucky you. We used to live there and I miss it everyday.

Daryl said...

Sweet

Kilauea Poetry said...

Ah, Maine..that could explain it. Looks so intense.
The one above is actually a Lily..amazing how some of these flowers appear similar. I was taking shots of an orchid tree and it looks just like the one here but pink. Thanks for your comments everyone-

Calico Crazy said...

I adore the mono photo, I almost missed the little kitty. I love when animals get along so well.

Calico Contemplations

The Write Girl said...

What an amazing acrostic. These are my favorite lines: "Rapturous vapors rise to greet the sun
Oh, but we've been mentored by the dawn..." Thanks for your kind words. I always find your poems and writing to be spiritual, beautiful, and inspiring.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hey thanks you..for reading this through. I think it got mixed up with the following post (at first I didn't have the Lily)..just the mono with the kitten and dog. Anyway, thank you! Trust me..your writing is the best and I really appreciate Acrostic now!

sojourner said...

Silly kitty! So cute. Well done acrostic!

Let's be perfectly clear- the war on free speech is spiritual!