Tuesday, April 28, 2009

I Keep Moving..It's Just One More Stop-

Early morning
Raindrops in my coffee
My pig..
She don't like
Mixed in her slop
Franks diving
The fish are biting
Jesse.. he's just
Hunting for goat
But I keep moving
On to the back..
It's just one more stop-

My dog's scratching
She's got no fleas?
Bones are aching
My minds
in a fog
Well I slipped
On my rear
Went over a log
Now I keep moving
On to the back..
Just one more stop-

Now I started

About all this pain
To think..
Those mushrooms

When I took um
.. (don't do it no more)
Was all
or fun?
I got a little lost
In some sort
Of time warp..
Wasn't sure

I was m
y Mother
Or if I was really

My Father..
Never quite figured
This one out? (
that's not exactly true)
But I keep moving
On to the back..

Just one more stop-


The Write Girl said...

Interesting poem weaving day to day life. I enjoyed the read. Especially enjoyed the line "Raindrops in my coffee" Great imagery there.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hey, thanks..guess I was in quite a mood?

Regina said...

Moving on to the back? so deep..beautiful one keep moving... love the shots..

Kilauea Poetry said...

Thank your Regina...much appreciation-

Robert V. Sobczak said...

Life is about keep moving (and drinking coffee). Interesting to make it with rain drops. Sounds nourishing.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Hi Robert..bet you didn't know we have water catchment here? ha..but we have a problem with filters or just fussing about them due to acid rain from the volcano. Hmm? Anyway,thanks for the read-

Pacey said...

HiRegina, you have a nice photo for the header. Do you know what the flower is called? I have a photo of the same but I'm not sure of it's name.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Pacey..hi. ya..I can imgine you probably have these growing where you are too? It's the Passion Flower..(lilikoi)for those who don't know. Apparently this one is more lavender, as some you've probably noticed -are more purple.

Titania said...

Hi Regina, thank you for your comment, I appreciate it. We are renovating the house...things are moved from one corner to the other! Anyway here I am and appreciating your poetry. I love this poem. The everyday rythm of your words. They just seem to flow from your inner being.
They sound vulnerable but still strong and positiv.

Kilauea Poetry said...

Titania..so glad dropped by..thanks for the read and your valuable encouragement your blogs are an inspiration-

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